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301A/B >> Writing for Mass Media >> Spring
2004 |
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Instructor:
Brian Carroll Office: LAU 114 Office hours: M/W, 11-1; T/Th 9:30-12:30; or by appointment; walk-ins welcome |
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Course Purpose & Objectives: To
introduce students to the fundamentals of news reporting, writing and judgment,
as well as to increase students’ knowledge of local, national, and international
current events. Also covered are interviewing techniques, issues in ethics
and professional conduct, and traditional and online news-gathering methods.
Students will be expected to write clear, accurate and meaningful news stories.
Goals: By the end
of this course, my goal is for students to:
• Know how to gather and select information, using both online and traditional
methods.
• Be able to organize that information into a news story, on deadline.
• Demonstrate improved news judgments, critical thinking skills and
professionalism.
• Become more effective communicators and wiser news consumers.
Reading assignments are identified in the week-by-week calendar.
There are two tests during the course of the semester. These tests could include multiple-choice, short answer and writing and editing on deadline. The final exam will be comprehensive and will be similar to the midterm.
While working in
class, these parameters apply:
• Quizzes: What resources students may use will vary.
Before each quiz, I will tell the class whether the quiz is open-book. I would
anticipate that students will be free to use the Associated Press stylebook
in most cases.
• In-class/in-lab assignments: Use any reliable references,
including stylebooks, dictionaries and online sources. Be careful with information
found on the Web. When in doubt, cross-check.
• Collaboration: I support collaboration, but any graded
work must be the student’s own. In some cases, I will encourage feedback
sought from one another. For other assignments, I may require solitary work.
I will try to be clear about each assignment. Generally, students should operate
under the assumption that they are accountable for their own work. When in
doubt, ask.
Deadlines:
• When an in-class/in-lab assignment is due, it is due. This reflects
the reality of many mass communication professions and work environments.
Late in-class assignments will not be accepted. Turn in whatever has been
done by deadline.
• If we have out-of-class assignments, they must be turned in by the
deadline. The only exceptions are medical- or health-related or those previously
arranged and approved by the instructor. Assignments will not be accepted
more than a week after deadline for any reason.
• Please note: If a student misses a class when an assignment is due
and that student has a legitimate excuse, I will accept the late assignment
without penalty at my discretion. I define what constitutes a legitimate excuse
and reserve the right not to grant full credit for assignments turned in under
these circumstances. The same holds true for exams.
Format for all assignments: Please remember: Double-space, 12-point type. Avoid exotic fonts and odd page layouts.
How your grade will be computed (note: this is a change from the printed syllabus):
| 50% | weekly and daily assignments, quizzes |
| 20% | midterm |
| 25% | final |
| 5% | professionalism (attendance, discussion, participation) |
| 100% | total |
To compute your final grade, add up your point totals, apply the appropriate percentages, then refer to this +/- grading chart:
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Definitions of the grades can be found in the Berry College Bulletin. “A” students will demonstrate an outstanding mastery of course material and will perform far above that required for credit in the course and far above that usually seen in the course. The “A” grade should be awarded sparingly and should identify student performance that is relatively unusual in the course.
Extra credit? Students have a standing invitation to bring in errors found in major mass media (major metropolitan newspapers, weekly news magazines, literary magazines, etc.). I will award, at my discretion, 1-5 points of extra credit for each error spotted and submitted (like a typo in the New York Times, for example, or misidentified photo). Submit the exhibit or a copy of the exhibit, write or type the problem found and its solution. Maximum points available per student during the term: 25. |
For some assignments, the following point deductions and additions will apply:
+2 to +10
for: developing an exceptionally effective lead; adding
substantial and appropriate supporting material; exceptional reorganization
or clarification.
+2 to +5 for: clarifying
or simplifying confusing copy (including leads); developing effective transitions;
catching an elusive error.
-2 to -5 for: (in photos/design)
failing to set a byline or credit line in type properly; writing too many
or two few lines in a cutline; failing to provide an accurate photo credit;
discretionary errors as unnecessarily bumping heads, placing art next to ads
or failing to vary head sizes.
-2 to -10 for: eliminating relevant detail; mistakes
in grammar, punctuation and AP style; introducing changes that add confusion
or wrongly interfere with the writer’s style; failing to improve significant
organizational problems (e.g., buried leads); failing to change an ineffective
lead or confusing sentence; allowing the copy to
contain jargon, clichés, wordiness, repetition, inappropriate quotes
or inaccurate words; minor factual errors (e.g., an inaccurate time element
if the effect on the story is insignificant); failing to supply missing information.
-5 to -10 for: (in
headlines/cutlines) failing to use all available space on the line effectively;
violating fundamental headline/cutline principles, such as bad breaks, unnecessary
use of past tense, or passive voice; acronyms or names that would not be immediately
recognized by the average reader.
-10 for: each spelling
error and each math error.
-10 to -20 for: (in headlines/cutlines)
tone or language inappropriate to the story; minor punctuation errors; grammatical
errors; minor capitalization or style errors; a first-day headline on a second-day
story, or vice versa; omitting key facts; missing the news; misleading, inaccurate
or inappropriate word choice.
-10 to -20 for: (in photos/design)
cropping a photo to remove an important detail; failing to fit a story on
a page; violating fundamental design principles, such as non-modular layout
or wrapping type out from under or above its own headline.
-20 for: not complying
with a headline order (e.g., wrong font, size, number of columns or lines).
-50 for: a major factual
error, such as a misspelled name; a misspelled headline; introducing libelous
material into copy.
-100 for: writing a libelous headline (much more
on this later).
This course is hands-on.
The classroom is the newsroom. Students will gather information, check facts,
use news judgment and write on deadline. On any given day:
• Students will be given a quiz on news events, spelling, grammar and
style.
• Students will give the class a report on what’s new on each beat
(more on beats later).
• I will make a presentation, with a Q&A and discussion. I will introduce
new material, go over previous exercises, and perhaps involve students in peer
editing.
• Students will write. I will explain what you need to know before you
do each exercise. As you write, I will try to offer help and provide feedback.
Assignment Preparation. All outside assignments must be typed, double-spaced, and all pages must be stapled — not paper clipped. They are due at the beginning of the class for which they are assigned. Papers that do not meet these minimum requirements will not be accepted.
Missing Links, Reserve Material. It is your responsibility to report to me immediately reserve readings that cannot be found or Web links that do not work. If you alert me to a problem in a timely fashion, I can solve it in an appropriate manner. Don't wait until the day of the quiz to tell me you could not find a reserve book or a link. Hint: The phone works better than e-mail when time is critical.
•Attendance. You are expected to meet the attendance standards of professional journalists. That means be in class — on time — every day. No unexcused absences will be permitted, and excessive tardiness will be penalized. If an emergency arises and you cannot attend class, please try to call me before class or leave a message at my office or home. If it is impossible to do this beforehand, please get in touch with me sometime during the day of the class you miss. Bear in mind that the instructor is the arbiter of what absences will be excused. Because of the schedule, makeup tutoring is impracticable.
• Focus: During class and labs, no e-mail, IM, or Web surfing. It prevents you from getting the information you need and it is distracting to your classmates and to me.
• Need Help? If you have special needs of any kind, including learning disabilities, please let me know. Come discuss it with me. I want to make sure on the front end that we prevent any problems associated with the course. Martha Van Cise, director of the Academic Support Center: “Students with disabilities who believe that they may need accommodation in this course are encouraged to contact the Academic Support Center in Krannert Room 301 as soon as possible to ensure that such accommodations are implemented in a timely fashion.
• Reporting
for the Media, by Fedler, Bender, Davenport and Drager
• Associated Press Stylebook
• Email subscription to the New
York Times’ daily headlines (it’s free)
• Access to local newspaper (Rome
News-Tribune) and major daily (i.e., New
York Times, Atlanta Journal Constitution,
Wall Street Journal). We can't talk about
newspapers if we don't read them.
Atlanta Journal-Constitution | Rome News-Tribune | New York Times | BBC Online
Calendar |
Topics |
Readings/Notes |
| Day
1:
Jan.
9 |
Introduction. Syllabus. Policies. What to expect. Powerpoint introducing AP Style | Sign up for NYTimes.com emailed headlines; buy your textbooks |
| Day
2:
Jan.
12 |
What
makes news? |
read:
Chapter 1 of Fedler AP Stylebook, sections A-F Copyediting symbols |
| Day
3:
Jan.
14 |
Current
events quiz | determine beats Writing Center presentation | other resources |
read: Fedler, appendices B, C, E due: Fedler, ex. 1, ch. 1; local broadcast assignment |
| Day
4:
Jan. 16 |
AP
style quiz | Writing | Leads and the inverted pyramid |
read:
Fedler, Ch. 2 AP Stylebook, sections G-L Kurt Vonnegut’s “How to write with style” due: Fedler ex 3 & 4, Chapter 1 |
| Jan. 19 | No class: MLK Jr. Day | familiarize yourself
with the class blog Watch Bush's State-of-the-Union |
| Day
5:
Jan. 21 |
Current events quiz (based on Tuesday's news sites, blog) |
read:
Ch. 3 & Ch. 12 (speeches); On writing well; AP Stylebook, sections M-R |
| Day
6:
Jan.
23 |
AP
style quiz (live) | Ledes Speech coverage on deadline |
Take
the
"Grambo" test |
| Day
7:
Jan.
26 |
Go over speech coverage | Ledes Language of News | story ideas by beat |
read:
Chapter 4; George
Orwell on Writing |
| Day
8:
Jan.
28 |
Current
events quiz (from Tuesday's sites, blog, class) |
NYTimes |
CNN.com Chapter 5 |
| Day
9:
Jan. 30 |
Style quiz | IT story ideas| Writing on deadline | due: Berry IT news story idea; revised story ideas with sources |
| Day
10:
Feb.
2 |
Ledes/Leads | Feedback survey | read:
Chapter 6 |
| Day
11:
Feb. 4 |
Current events quiz | Finish ledes | read:
Chapter
7 due: Ch. 6, exercise 4 |
| Day
12:
Feb. 6 |
Ledes | AP style quiz | dealing with numbers | Read:
News
writing (pages 1-6) |
| Day
13:
Feb. 9 |
Story architecture | go over story ideas | finish ledes | Read:
Chapters 8 & 9 due: ledes exercise II; your 3 good ledes and the reasons they're good |
| Day
14:
Feb. 11 |
Finish story architecture (in preparation for Friday's lab) | due: NOTHING! |
| Day
15:
Feb.
13 |
Quotes and attribution | Newsroom workshop: speech stories (due at end of lab) | due: take-home ledes exercise |
| Day
16:
Feb. 16 |
Guest speaker: John Druckenmiller, founder, Hometown Headlines and former editor of the Rome News-Tribune | due: 3 good quotes and why; 1 good speech story; 3 questions for Druck |
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Day
17: Feb. 18 |
Interviewing | partnering up | go over ledes exercise | go over speech stories | read: interview backgrounder for your partner; current events quiz for BC; final story idea |
| Day
18:
Feb.
20 |
Interviewing | re-writing speech stories | no AP style quiz (too much to do!) | due: ledes exercise III |
| Day
19:
Feb.
23 |
Finish Interviewing | due: late ledes exercises |
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Day
20: Feb. 25 |
Final project budget meeting |
due: notes from watching/listening to interview; profile interview stories |
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Day
21:
Feb. 27 |
Online source credibility | Quiz on Chapter 6 (ledes) |
Read
(browse through): Newswriting.com Evaluating Web sites Web searching Government info on the Web Search engines |
| Day
23:
March 1 |
Brites,
follos, roundups and sidebars | observation exercise |
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| Day
24:
March 3 |
Prepare for midterm (bring your questions) | current events quiz (tuesday's New York Times and CNN.com) | finish budget meeting (301-B) | discuss brites, sbrs, featurettes | Review
Chapters 1-10, 12 |
| Day
25:
March 5 |
Midterm
(3 parts: 2 AP style and 1 writing on deadline); open book, open
Net; bring a stylebook and a Rome phone book AP Stylebook online (just for Bryan) |
due: Fedler ledes exercise, 156-157 (city beat stories only, 5 of them) |
| Day
26:
March 8 |
Go over midterms | mediated interviews | transitions in stories (to prep us for feature writing) |
due: at
least six questions your final story will try to answer; at
least two credible secondary sources for final (Web sites,
press coverage, press releases, reports) read: course blog on the lawyer who cannot spell |
| Day
27: March 10 |
Feature writing |
Read:
Chapter
14 due: at least three specific sources (names, titles, contact information) for final (no Web sites) |
| Day
28: March 12 |
Work on feature stories on your own; have a great spring break | Read: Brief analysis of a feature news story |
| Day
29: March 22 |
Public affairs reporting | Read: Chapter 15 |
|
Day
30: |
Public affairs reporting | current events quiz | due: feature story (700-1,000 words); double-spaced & printed hard copy |
| Day
31: March 26 |
Prepare for Deborah Horan: international reporting; inter- and multi-cultural contexts | AP style quiz | due: by end of lab, Horan dossier using online sources; public affairs story for Rome Herald |
| Day
32: March 29 |
Special guest speaker: Deborah Horan, Woodrow Wilson Visiting Fellow. Topic: Journalism in and on the Middle East |
due: 10 questions for Horan typed up and printed out; feature story re-dos |
| Day
33: March 31 |
Horan
follow-up | reviewing past assignments |
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| Day
34: April 2 |
blogs & personal publishing | business information | Read:
Blogs;
BC
on blogging Business information due: blog assignment |
| Day
35: April 5 |
Writing for broadcast | Read: Chapter 18 |
| Day
36: April 7 |
Open meetings, sunshine laws | quiz/exercise on broadcast writing (open book) | Read: Chapter 20 |
| Day
37: April 9 |
Lab: writing for broadcast assignment (due at end of lab) | Read:
Georgia's Sunshine Laws due: ~300-word print news story re-written for broadcast |
Day
38: |
business writing | intranets | newsletters | Your
favorite blogs |
| Day
39: April 14 |
ethics | last current events quiz | course evaluations | Read: CNN.com, NY Times |
| Day
40: April 16 |
final project newsroom | > |
| Day
41: |
ethics II | Read:
Read:
Chapter 21; Jayson
Blair reading |
| Day
42: April 21 |
course wrap-up | Read: Power Reporting |
| * | Final
writing projects due: Section A: by 10:30 a.m., Friday, April 23 Section B: by 1:30 p.m., Monday, April 26 turn into me (LAU 114) | late assignments not accepted (but I will take early submissions) |
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InfoPlease.com, a
source for almanacs and info found in almanacs
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Britannica Online
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Biography.com, biographical
encyclopedia
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Dictionary.com
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YourDictionary.com,
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Acronym Finder
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CMP’s TechEncyclopedia,
for tech-related information
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Statistics.com
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University of Michigan’s
Statistical Resources on the Web
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University of Michigan’s
Internet Public Library, reference materials
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UselessKnowledge.com,
not all of it is useless, good trivia site
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Contentious.com
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Cyberjournalist.net
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Edit-Work.com
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Publish.com
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Web Editor’s
Toolkit from Merry Bruns
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The Poynter Institute is a font of material for journalists. One gem is Roy Peter Clark's brief item, "If I were a carpenter: The tools of the writer."
A good page that can get you started in a lot of good directions is the Scripps Job Resources page. Among its several good links are American Journalism Review's JobLink for Journalists and Editor & Publisher magazine's classifieds. The American Society of Newspaper Editors' Careers in Journalism site has some good information, including an up-to-date internship guide and information targeted to that first job at a small newspaper.
Some good information is to be had at the National Diversity Newspaper Jobs Bank, including listings of minority job fairs. Sources of minority internships and fellowships are also available at the National Association of Black Journalists, Asian American Journalists Association, National Association of Hispanic Journalists and Native American Journalists Association sites. Likewise, the National Lesbian & Gay Journalists Association has a jobs board at its site.
For internships, start by looking at the opportunities in the Dow Jones Newspaper Fund program.
To help you prepare for internship and job tests, I've put together a small collection of links at InternshipPrep. Some of the links duplicate items in the much-longer collection you see here, but some are unique to Internship Prep. Check it out.
The Poynter Institute site has a wealth of material, including some good suggestions for St. Petersburg Times copy editor applicants as the paper searches for "the perfect copy editor." Don't be fooled by the focus on copy editing, these tips will work for anyone.
The Cincinnati SPJ chapter has an interesting report on trends in journalism pay at the "Show Us the Money" site. The American Newspaper Guild's Web site includes reports on top minimums and other salary data for U.S. and Canadian newspaper reporters, photographers and editors.
Know what a "solecism" is? A "tautology"? Want to brush up on spelling skills? Mindy McAdams' Words for Copy Editors has a lot, including the syllabus for a course she teaches in magazine copy editing.
Stumped on spelling? Not sure of an acronym? Need a thesaurus? Looking for off-beat dictionaries? Robert Beard's one-site shopping center, On-Line Dictionaries, links to more than 400 searchable references.
Copy editors who use pop words and phrases — buzzwords — do
so at their peril if they do not know the word's meaning. BuzzWhack identifies
and critiques the latest language trends.
FACSNET is a valuable site created by The Foundation for American Communications, "to provide the knowledge and resources journalists and their sources need to effectively communicate information to the public through the news. "Good source of background information, reporting tips, etc.
The Journal of Mass Media Ethics is indexed from Vol. 10 (1995) on.
For a large collection of case studies in media ethics, check out this Indiana University site.
questions
or comments? email Brian @ bc at berry.edu
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